All Comments on 'Come Cum In My Mouth'

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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
So whip it out Harry

Somebody call me?

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A HEADER A DAY

keeps the doctor at bay. TK U MLJ LV NV

MisterSadeMisterSadeover 11 years ago
Come one, come all.

Be it your rise or your fall.

MisterSadeMisterSadeover 11 years ago
So tight.

And could not care less of my name and my fame

For I still sport a tight cunt and a taut maidenhead

erectus123erectus123over 11 years agoAuthor
of course I was thinking of you!

harry, why not

coolinacoolinaover 11 years ago
Nice

I really got into this and was eager to read it all despite the length. Great job. Could use a few grammar tweaking!

erectus123erectus123over 11 years agoAuthor
dearest coolina

thank you for enjoying the poem and your comments, any suggestions would be welcome, warmest regards, er.

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