All Comments on 'Coming home'

by Willow Rain

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jthserrajthserraabout 13 years ago
nicely done

this is erotica, wonderfully subtle

jth : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love the last line

"His body is my home." I love your simplicity to flesh out true emotion.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in todays reviews

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