by Lauren Hynde
Works for me. The imagery is intense and the rhythm, meter or whatever has me floating out of the room.
...with the previous opinions, the imagery is beautiful. I find I need and want to read this poem several times, there are so many lovely, miniature pictures in the whole canvas.
Tess
the imagery here, esp the last line. Reminds me a lot of John Berryman.
Intelligent and beautifully written, seared with that white hot imagination of yours.