by Temple of the Heart
I can't quite make up my mind about this extremely erotic poem, which uses a King James Bible sounding language in juxtaposition to the images of a cock fucking an arse that the language describes.<br><br>
However, though a potentially crude image to begin with you manage to create the soft gentle beauty in a woman achieving ecstasy so that the crudity is transformed to romanticism. That is a remarkable achievement. <br><br>An erotic poem that actually arouses my sexual desire because the scene it evokes is so vividly beautiful