All Comments on 'Contemplations'

The concept of isolation within a crowd is a good one, but gets lost among incomplete metaphors and grammatical errors. I think this poem has potential, LonelyLord.

Lonley Lord,

I love this.. Its a great style. I can see what every word means.. Yes I said *See*.. Its a great poem. I love the aloneness in the crowd. I think we have all been there.. In that spot in time,, alone an yet surrounded..Wanting, Needing,, Attention an just the knowledge that someone Is there an does See us...Hear us...Want to be with us... I want to see more of your writing. Keep it up~~!!!! *Smiles**

Spend less time contemplating life and more time living it. And as for your final question, No.