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Click hereI feel it.
Warmth.
Wet.
Fire.
Pooling in
My core.
Shimmers. Heat lightning dances
across
My skin.
I writhe.
My heart
Clenches.
I breathe.
Exhaling
Fire.
Desire.
Lust.
My head falls back.
I let the pleasure
Move through
Me.
Everywhere
Electrons become
Unmoored. Move through
Me
Igniting trails
Of fire
Searching for kindred
Molecules.
Tiny suns
Fiery trails.
Through
Blood
Muscle
Skin
All
Rushing back
To me.
My center.
My core.
Gathering suns.
Turning.
Twisting.
Perched
On the edge
Of ecstasy.
Slow
Powerful
Curls
Delicious
Tickles
Delirious
Sensation.
Gathering
Gathering
Twirling
Rolling
It catches.
Holds.
Pulls.
Stretches.
Stretches.
Massive ecstasy
Grabs hold
In my core
Folding
Folding
Rolling
Explosion
Supernova
Stars. Suns. Atoms.
RELEASE!
The wave
Rolls
Through me.
Peel outwards
Muscles seize.
Head falls back.
Primordial utterances
Grab vocal cords.
Delirium roars
My core
Seizes
Again
Again
Delicious
Pulsing
Pulsing
Moisture
Drenching
The center
Again
Again.
Gathering
Tension
Release
Glory
In sound
Sensation
Spasms of utter
Pleasure
Mindless
Release
The universe
Enfolded
In me
My womb
My core
Power
Sheer
Raw
Pleasure and
Wonder
Release.
The magic
Of
The Feminine.
The power of
The She.
I liked the pacing. It certainly added to the tension. I can visualize you writhing, sweaty, tangled in the sheets with the unseen lover buried between your thighs under the comforter while West African percussion plays faintly in another room
Love your work
~Enkidu
...interrupts the smooth flow and replaces it with a demanding pow pow pow rhythm that crescendos urgently towards the climax. An intense multi sensory explosion sculpted with mere letters and words. Very nice.
this staccato list in 1950's beat format, some nice lines but lose impact in this format