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I won't comment on rhyme and rhythm

since that southern accent can drawl it pretty smooth,

but you might want to edit your written words so the eye sees as "purty" as the ear hears.

edit:

"untill" = until

"starts to arose" = arise (Come now, poetic license only goes so far!)

"love one" = loved one (in most places).

Good job, darlin'. As always.

~*~*Shianne*~*~

Hey Deb! I think anything you would read sounds pretty Sexy to me! Love the Accent but then Poem was good as well!

Very good bamagirl. Short and sweet. Love good ole southern cooken.

Nice one, Art! I'm a ctfish and cobbler fan too :)

your poem makes me want to just go straight to that ranch,

spend a little comfort time.

Just a bit of the country here.

great poem!