All Comments on 'Possibly Near My Heart'

I liked it in the challenge and like it here too, AH. The title however doesn't appeal to me. "Metaphor," is an abstraction. If one doesn't know what a metaphor is, look it up in the dictionary. An image suggesting metaphor in the title, rather than the descriptive use of the word, would have made a very good poem better IMO.

I loved "Possibly, Near My Heart," a good title perhaps to suggest something else?