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Angelineover 10 years agoGave it a five because you don't ever write a bad poem
but I agree with Harry that the one line is unclear. Seems like maybe some sort of typo...I am not getting it. Otherwise, love it. Hairspray is a very good metaphor for rigidity.
susansnowover 10 years agoAuthorProlly not the best most concise sentence
sorry 'bout that guys. I'll do better next time.
Trixareforkidsalmost 10 years agoFunny,
The line in question made perfect sense to me. It read as absent minded affection and a lack of passion. Which perfectly set up what was to follow.
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susansnow@susansnowSingle female writer. Most of my work is an effort to unlock my true self from the trauma of a lifetime of violent experiences, both sexual and nonsexual. I enjoy using the prose poetry style but have been known to venture from and to form and category. I enjoy reading comment...
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