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Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
Damn!

You go from passion to down right fucking, eh? Ah, this is what I like:) You got a sick mind like me with a wonderful heart, and can write about anything. Definitely cool, girl!

Bite my breasts,

I fill your requests,

Lifting my ass,

Snake in the grass -this made me think. Either the person was a smake in the grass or you got one in your ass *grins*

Be careful with forcing rhymes. They seen to appear that way. My only suggestion here, my dear.

As always, no harm meant.

High 5!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
creak 2

oh my Im hooked...love this little inferno of words...

and of course the reasoning for the perfect timing creak..hehehehe...witty...wonderful...imaginative~

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