by tungtied2u
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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If you don't know what sweetmeat is, you'll miss much of what's said here. Ouch!
since i've seen anything from you. i can feel this all the way in rubbing up against my bones to a chill......nicely done.....don
I loved this sad lil poem~!!
Reaches out, grabbs ya.
Sends ya whirling into the land of the damned~
Imagery is the key here.
So much is said in painting, each stroke of the bitter brush.
Excellent~!!
Very deep ... emotional
More Please~!!
i echo what ange said in her pc. "excellent, but bitter"
good to see some write from you again.
wow, didn't realize how much I missed your poetry till I read this, more please, and glad to see ya back