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by lobomao

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champagne1982champagne1982over 16 years ago
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Dense imagery here as is, I think if you were to incise through the words and create a sparser version, this would become even stronger.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Dark and somber with hints of feelings of lost depression, normally out of keeping with the holiday season.

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