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now for the mercenaries, TK U MLJ LV NV

The thought this triggered, "I like it, I want it, I want some more of it"!

The thought this triggered, "I like it, I want it, I want some more of it"!

bitchin' curty

bitchin'

The whole greater than the sum of its parts. ~Imp

I had never thought about the right and left hemispheres of the brain as being a schism. I always think of popes, for some reason, but yeah, a schism. I like the emphasis your colors and font size gives this piece. Im sure I will read it many more times. Thanks for an interesting work to ponder :)

maria

of fonts to emphasize the different thoughts.

This I like. You use fonts great for emphasis breathing even more backbone into an already strong poem.

like the txt effect and the

flow of your words.

A big thumbs up from me.

Well done,

Thanks.

~ J

The visual of the text effect adds 3D emotion to your poem.

I'm not a prophet or a stone age man

Just a mortal with the potential of a superman

I'm living on

I'm tethered to the logic of Homo Sapien

Can't take my eyes from the great salvation

Of bullshit faith

If I don't explain what you ought to know

You can tell me all about it

On the next Bardo

I'm sinking in the quicksand of my thought

And I ain't got the power anymore