All Comments on 'Dark Sultry Forest'

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vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
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Weird but interesting.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
some nice imagery

Last line throws me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Metaphorical? Yes?

after reading this several times, I think I get it,

A girl coming into adolescents?

The forest-- her pubic hairs, always wet, the trees are boys, branches are; many cocks, and she has her choice.

Her sexuality is her power, the impish smile tells it all.

and she doesn't need to use her mother's dido anymore.

The metaphors are many.

Nicely done. (Teen Fun)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Perfect Illustration

Of nature and a young girl coming into her own. I know, I've been there.

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