All Comments on 'daughter of the crossroads'

OK, I like this, good flow and word choice ...

I like this poem. Nice tense pacing. A good obvious use of meter either instinctive or deliberate. A clever poem with great imagery.

Agree with both comments above; however, can't quite grasp "warrior's plow."

from my favourite poet. Lovely imagery, an instant access to a stunning word picture. Ty. (one tiny error--it should be "secrete" not "secret")

especially this line -

and

sleeps without dreaming, and

dreams without sleep