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by The Gentle Man06

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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And so the day begins,

With a nice short write....

oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
this read is

delicate and sweet...loved the image and tinalating words!

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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