by Icingsugar
What a loving, tender poem! I sure do like you cake guy; your poetry so consistently shows your good heart. Thanks for the read. :-)
imagery and commentaries here. I almost felt I was the seagull cocking my eye at you, listening and watching every interaction, while being a part. Beautiful, thank you. (Loved the word games played back and forth)
Here I am without Lit access for not even a week, and you try to sneak this wonderful poem about little Chrissie by me! It's wonderful! I'll have to remember to give her an extra hug from you before I head back home.
...maybe cuz I know where you are, and wish I was, and maybe because you speak the language of children. Whatever it is I loved it!
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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