All Comments on 'Death and the Maiden'

by demure101

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
why do i get the feeling

this would have been a hit

in 1840

neoform rewrite

4ed

lust,lust,lust, Death and dark horse

of course, of course

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
That's what greed gets us, eh?

A lovely turn of irony!

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Very Ambitious

to try an ode like this. I think you could have worked on stronger language and more novel metaphors to make your point more originally, but it is certainly much above the cut of most of today's offerings as ever. Sweet O.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
A retellin' of the Saga of Persephone

& the Lord of Hades ???!

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