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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
I...

...just get sweep away by the grace of your language and the clarity and uniqueness of your images. Reading your work is not only pleasing, but also insructive.

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Wonderful!

I read your work more than once: not only to explore the dense imagery and to uncover missed nuance, but also because it is so delightful to read!

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful way with word's wards

Some excellent phrases as well:

"messages of hope and drear

letters of sobbing need

invocations to all I have loved and filed as dried leaves in crannies"

A fun read,

and send me a bank check too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Five!

This is a wild romp. I'll join you, JC. I love the image of your poems tacked to telegraph poles and stuck on the vans.

I'm enjoying you work more and more!

More, please!

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Praise the Lord!

and pass the dish. Collecting for jc- he's earned it!

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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