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The title caught my attention.

And the first few lines leave me wondering if you were inspired by my wednesday's walk. :)

Anyway, good poem. And I really love that title.

I had to read it several times because it was a bit choppy in areas. I think it had to do with very little punctuation. I would really consider it or doing some line breaks. Thank you for sharing and keep writing! :)