All Comments on 'Deep Down'

Quite vivid imagery, expressing what many wish they could express in this poem's ending.

This poem was mentioned in Saturday's New Poems Reviews.

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Iffy to end on a cliche, you should do a little more play with the title to avoid the obvious. But it worked for me.

quite funny how they always seem to come in

unsettled, and then you realize you have to

play the part, ease into it.. in time for it

to leave, and then THANK YOU, it is OVER !

see ya next year, LOL...... I like it, and I

have missed ya !

sGp

Aw hell, just burn the damn things thats whut I dew.