Deeper (Erotic Freeverse by Me)

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erotic freeverse about that feeling of deepening connection
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Just when I think

I can’t possibly feel more

want more

need more…

Just when I think

my eyes have seen

everything that can be called beauty

in your eyes,

Just when I think

my heart can’t beat any faster,

and my breath

can’t catch in my throat

any more than it already does,

You take me deeper.

Just when I think

I’ve found perfection

in your trembling touch,

heaven in your smile,

and something like home

in the sweet music of your laugh,

Just when I think

I can’t crave your body

more than I do now,

can’t ache for your warmth

and hunger for release

in the shelter of your arms,

Just when I think

there is no greater pleasure

than giving myself to you

in every way a person can

You take me deeper…

You unfold before me

like a desert bloom

welcoming, alluring

verdant with sensual promise

and lush pleasure,

You pull me in,

deeper

and deeper

until I’m joined with you

in that most primal

and savage of ways…

You surround me, engulf me

drag from my ragged voice

sounds of pleasure and pain,

of sweet agony and desperation

as my body obeys your

skillful commands.

And just when I think

I can’t possibly be any deeper

lost in your depths and

utterly yours,

you turn your eyes up to me

and smile

and I know

that I am only

just barely

skimming

the surface.

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5 Comments
derherrenwolfderherrenwolf3 months ago

Her voice is to die for.

Paul4playPaul4play4 months ago

Beautiful, erotic, arousing, enticing, lyrical and sensuous.

sport404sport4045 months ago

Finally poetry that's most enjoyable. Great reading, thoroughly a great feel.

Biglibido99Biglibido995 months ago

Sensual poem, sensually read - beautiful

DeusdarkDeusdark5 months ago

Increasingly enjoying your poetry and accompanying reads. Well done 👏

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