by Liar
That's all I could hear.
Great work
great phrasing
A glimpse of the Raj
Thank you
"drives better
than he dances"
As usual, you have a wonderful way with descriptive detail.
Wonderful character observations, and beautifully expressed.
That old poem, dark south carolina or whatever, of mine doesn't need an E. It kind of bites. lol But this is wonderful!!!
I must read this stanza again:
Sanjib draws houses
combs his hair to the left
drives better
than he dances
likes Brodsky and Peanuts
and real English tea
Do you realize how good your poem is?
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