All Comments on 'Deidre's rug'

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lorencinolorencinoover 14 years ago
Splendido

You pulled off a lovely, lascivious piece here, fluff and all, in spite of the constraints of the form.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
I like it

I find it more erotic than 'Someday my Prince will come'

Brings back memories of times with her on the rug, under the tree. Good Pantoum.

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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Good show! A pantoum can be a slippery beasty to nail as I recently discovered. I like it.

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