All Comments on 'Desire'

by demure101

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

i like this one, bfd

ings forgiven, but over inged a bit

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WHEN YOU ARE CALLING

is it vocally or mind blowing, TK U MLJ LV NV

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Another great one but one thing...

When you wrote wattled - A construction of poles intertwined with twigs, reeds, or branches, used for walls, fences, and roofs - did you mean mottled - spotted or blotched with different shades or colours?

Whatever. Let's re-read your verse to love the spring before winter kills us with it's lack of kindness.

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