All Comments on 'different world'

by Senna Jawa

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Innocence of a child, bewildered

Counterpoint to an adult's vile hate.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
What a difference lifetimes make!

Perhaps the little girl's erroneous spelling of Terrorist as errorists says it all. Pity the little children - pity all who dwell in the no man's land of a mad man's cruel ambition.

LiarLiarover 17 years ago
To err is human

But like that girl, I'm also afraid of errorists. Moreso than terrorists.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
^

To err and realize it is human. To err and think God is working through you is to be an errorist.

Senna JawaSenna Jawaover 17 years agoAuthor
her understanding

Thank you for all comments, including the shockingly shallow "...humor!!...LOL...!!!...cheers". (The repetitions in my poem are perfect).

About humor, yes, children are amusing. This is a humane touch, that's all.

The child cannot accept that the heinous crimes are committed on purpose, hence she believes that the word must be "errorist". This way she can somehow explain the world around her.

Thank you, it's nice to have readers :),

Senna Jawa

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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