All Comments on 'Digital Tapestry'

by Decayed Angel

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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Very Consistent to here:

a digital tapestry

into the phone lines.

I would take these two lines and shove them in another poem, they are good, but at the end of this one you want something that either really burns/ or quenches

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.

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