All Comments on 'dinner summer dusk'

this poem makes me want to roll around in a salad with you and then lick all the dressing off ;)

I imagined a table cloth bedspread.

A room without walls

essential elements

interchangable uses

simplicity

Awesome, awesome language.

Made my stomach growl!

dh

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