All Comments on 'Dirty Musings.'

but so poorly written - uneven rhyme pattern but nice try- maybe if read by a foriegn speaker it would rhyme--"Oh you leave me begging for more easily." that line should be entered into contest for the worst line of the year" yuck--and "Use me like your personal sex doll." reminds me of an impersonal sex doll covered with seminal contributions from a variety of donors----- this poem should be titled "Grunt" cause that's what it made me do----but keep at it, all in all a good ten minute try, give it an hour and even Keats would be jealous

First time for me reading erotic poetry. Very good imagery.