All Comments on 'Dissonance'

With the length involved... perhaps a series? I enjoyed your poem (~_~) thanks for the literary journey of words and images.

You are perhaps trying to do too much all at once in this poem.

The abecedarian words and collegic concepts are not perfected enough to gain from your plays with spacing and vice-versa.(IMO)

Otherwise an interesting read and a work worth developing.

Question: Why start each line with a capital except for one stanza? (I personally would prefer to see a more sparing use of capital letters.)

edit suggestions: "Cause by a" - verb tense?

". . . tattooed onto babies eyeballs" - possessive

"Orientate itself" - possibly, but check word meaning