All Comments on 'Divergence'

very clearly offers another view as in probably saying two things at once, looks like a sonnet but I'm little more amazed by this

in livid yellow and unhealthy green -

I have a bad rap for being Adjective happy, so keep that in mind when I say I like, glad ti see the palate expanding from the usual grey.

very very 5ed,

of lowering clouds, strong , threatening & stark .........

these Gothic clouds always transport this reader into the charmed Horrors of Transylvania of my unfettered imagination !! thnx for sharin' Dem : 5-ed .

I started reading your poems from 'A' but it seems you are drawing away from me. No problem when they are all as good as the ones you have entered in the last few days

What a beautiful picture, creates a mood and sends my mind to many thoughtful and not always happy road trips.