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by Mark_Loves_Coffee

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melimelissamelimelissaabout 2 months ago

I like that you have not had to force the rhyme but sustained the form

DampKittenDampKittenabout 2 months ago

You keep a nice meter and don't force your rhyme. You should try free verse as an option, occasionally.

Read some examples first.

But yeah, you've got that masturbation kink going here. Very sultry piece. Exotic.

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Happily married, but got a naughty side. Love to write poetry. Love watching people. Here for the giggles and company. Always happy to chatter. Make love not war.