All Comments on 'Do I cross your mind?'

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 7 years ago
This......

....is different, wistful even a little sad but I have to say, in my curmudgeonly way, that I really don't like the use of ur and u, up 'til then I enjoyed the writing.

Satyr61Satyr614 months ago

This is sad but very beautiful. Touched me deeply.

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