All Comments on 'Do Not Disturb'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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I did not fully understand this poem.. but it does not matter really. I felt disturbed and lonely. I felt the need to cleanse to be seen.. to be alone and not alone. So even though I do not "get" it.. I liked it..It made me feel so much...

Du~

Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Dark.

Like the previous poster, this poem is a bit hard to decipher, yet, I assume it deals with being guilty of a crime and repressing an urge to commit another one. Anyhow, it's an edgy look inside humans' most dangerous instincts.

VixandraVixandraabout 19 years ago
Edgy

I'm thinking either obssessive compulsive or a deed the do'er perceives as evil.

Either way- great word usage and play.

ShadowsandflamesShadowsandflamesabout 19 years ago
Judging yourself

Very dark. I love the feel of guilt and the feeling that you are trying so hard to hide it from the world and yet it seems like you are trying to warn them away as well, which leads to feeling of confliction. I know this feeling well but could not have put it in to words as well as you have.

S&F

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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