All Comments on 'Do You Like Me?'

There is a neat trickling style here, but the form is obscured by some IMO too in-your-face innuendos. Those first lines are a real gem though:

Fucking bee

in my bonnet

you can't believe

how bad I want it

Damn right.

You have a flair for the rhythm of the language. Try something less...well...porny next. :)