All Comments on 'Done'

about being tired. Conveys futility quite well in the gray statement like quality of it. Personally, I think a little more emotion would have made it a more interesting read, but for what it is saying it works well.

...and less from the mind, would have made this a more satisfying read for me. So, chalk me up as chiming in with Lostandfounder.

A nice poem that can be a good poem.