All Comments on 'Double-Jointed'

by Man Ray

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
FROM WHENCE CUM INSPIRATION

into my brain. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent pairing of illustration with thought. And someone actually got it right in those comments below. For once this really is a haiku.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Waiting..

waiting.. for the stamen

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
planting.

"Inspiring a poet's quill..." Lovely flower with it's pollen ready to be given. Lovely ethereal rendering.

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
My Erotic Trail/Maria2394/IrishBayou/forest_femme

Please accept my belated thanks for your good-hearted comments.

forest_femmeforest_femmeover 17 years ago
Felicitations

Would have helped in gym class! Spectacular illustration and haiku; keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sorry but

All I see is a stupid flower. Looks pretty though, but erotic??? Hell na!!!

Whats it called so I can get it for my girl next Valentinz

IrishBayouIrishBayouover 17 years ago
Blow Me Down!

She's a pistol! ;-) and she ain't afraid to show it! An outrageous spread 'em image 'neath a quaint haiku! Marvellous!

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
colors

in this are absolutely beautiful, and the words that accompany are even better. Your illustrated poems are getting better with every submission and I find myself looking for them :)

maria

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
poetic...

...pictorials! You not only got the hang of it... you do it well (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Pure Sex!

This poem and erotic image conjures up thoughts and visions of such a sexual nature that I want to make love.

Failing that I'll need a cold shower!

Anonymous
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