All Comments on 'Doubt'

by demure101

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todski28todski28almost 9 years ago
I was into it from the start

but something about four final lines

"the cruel minotaur" falls flat, I don't know why but it kind of killed the mood for me. I belie it could be finished off better, especially with your abilities as a poet :)

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
WHY IS THERE DOUBT

the monsters will always be here. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 9 years ago
Welcome to the Garden of

Nightmares 'n Dark Fears , Dem ..........

5-ed.

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