All Comments on 'Down in the Basement'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
a very poignant saga :

of a victim of cruel Fate . A very heart-rending sad tragic tale , Erectus ! very heart-breaking but maybe Elsie enjoyed some happiness with her son . RIP Elsie . 5-ed.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Got caught up reading it

nice linear path and rhyme

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
An enjoyable Ballad

I too was caught up in the telling of this story...... Nicely presented and there are generally positive things that are gleaned from seemingly negative situations.... Thanks for sharing your talents.

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 Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...

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