All Comments on 'Dreams w/Everything To Go'

okay that does it, I must read everything of yours in here

as

and the title

was just the sweet

enticement...

I think I shall venture

to the cave now...

well done my friend !

-sGp-

how I love all of your work, right?

This one is right up near the top for me.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

Another mind twister. Good for fun, students of poetry and aging people who try to keep their brains in good shape (guess to which group I belong…).

It’s the right way to treat metaphors - shake them to fresh life by realizing them. Thus the stalactites from the ‘cave’ re appear as virtual earrings of the returning lady… what other visions has she brought?