All Comments on 'Dusk's jewels'

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...done. A pleasure to read!

A common observation nicely drawn.

The colors are all there

and cloud wisps too.

Nature's nightly jewels

abound around Gaia's neck

before the tiara in her hair,

the diamonds nightly in the air.

Please keep writing like this.

Your imagery is very strong.

at sunset. An beautiful observation in metaphor. Very good...

jim : )