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All Comments on 'Dying Game'

by Chantilyvamp

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Almost a stylized vision of submission.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
secure.

How comforting to have someone accompany you to the Gate ~ just before you cross over ~ hold your hand

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerover 17 years ago
Meter off, theme good

The meter was off in some of the lines. Just count the syllables and accents. They must match between the two stanzas.

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