All Comments on 'E Cigarettes and Unleaded Coffee'

I like a lot in this poem. I do however find myself more than a bit lost. The lack of punctuation (fair enough) leaves me intellectually challenged and unsure how the verses hang together. Not saying there is not a thread, merely that it eludes me in places.

I love the metaphor of the soggy cardboard box and how you build on it.

I really, really like the last verse, which seems to stand alone as a poem - one that I suspect a good fair few of the female readers and writers in the Literotica poetry hubs would drink to.