by My Erotic Tail
My heart was filled when I read this poem then listened to it a few times. Thank you.
Very moving, in a time when our troops need support the most someone does justice in words. Very very good my friend. I over look any grammer foresights in light of the meaning behind these words. All I can say is excellent, and if any body is low enough to comment on grammer when truely the artistry is before them, they only show their limited mentality. I hope you'll do another. (LEE)
One poem that says so much. Words that bring us such a calming effect.
Wonderfully read...Wonderfully written..Pride is in all Americans...
Thank you..
is alive and kickin! Beautiful words said with such emotion and pride... wonderful job, precious Art!! :kiss:
~A
The content is what makes this poem exceptional...if it were professional poetry it would not have as great a meaning. The fact that you as an ex military man are now moved to write is what it's all about man ! I'm proud of your submission...You tell the world in yet another way who we are as a nation and why we cannot be defeated unless they somehow figure a way to wipe out all of us...It's also funny that the person who said they overlook your grammar...spelled it wrong.
Ha Ha...go man go...s