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Click hereThe content is what makes this poem exceptional...if it were professional poetry it would not have as great a meaning. The fact that you as an ex military man are now moved to write is what it's all about man ! I'm proud of your submission...You tell the world in yet another way who we are as a nation and why we cannot be defeated unless they somehow figure a way to wipe out all of us...It's also funny that the person who said they overlook your grammar...spelled it wrong.
Ha Ha...go man go...s
is alive and kickin! Beautiful words said with such emotion and pride... wonderful job, precious Art!! :kiss:
~A
One poem that says so much. Words that bring us such a calming effect.
Wonderfully read...Wonderfully written..Pride is in all Americans...
Thank you..
Very moving, in a time when our troops need support the most someone does justice in words. Very very good my friend. I over look any grammer foresights in light of the meaning behind these words. All I can say is excellent, and if any body is low enough to comment on grammer when truely the artistry is before them, they only show their limited mentality. I hope you'll do another. (LEE)
My heart was filled when I read this poem then listened to it a few times. Thank you.