All Comments on 'Early On Wednesday Morning'

I like 3,4,5 stanzas, very nice.

Steam-powered sun does not work. Nautilus and League recalls 20,000 Leagues is also a bad nexus.

Otherwise, a nice non-sexual poem working well. Optimistic and fun to read. Cut to the heart of the poem and omit all else. Brevity may result, but that's ok. I always like your romantic sex poems but watch the usage of language carefully, if it's trite it ain't right.