All Comments on 'Echoes on the Water'

Moving, poignant and thought provoking. For me a poem that resonates stirs feelings and thoughts. This poem did just that. For example:

“As far as this life

I know I’d feel alright


To be a friend instead of uninvited”.

She is fooling herself; unrequited love has no real substitute, it would seem in the repeated lines almost forlorn:

“If I can't love him how I want,


let me love him in my mind.”

Very nice piece. Thanks.

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