Eden at Dusk

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unwinding at sunset
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RiverMaya
RiverMaya
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Night dropping her cloak of evening stars,
while dusk makes her journey
across the fading daylight.
Stay awhile with me, to gaze at the sun
as he leaves a trail of gold and red across the sky.
Yes, there is peace in solitude,
but two souls sharing the calm of evening's coming
is paradise in truth.

RiverMaya
RiverMaya
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PickFictionPickFictionabout 2 years ago

Interesting use of "he" and "she" there.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years ago

“ but two souls sharing the calm of evening's coming

is paradise in truth “

So very true…..!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 2 years ago

I love this poem. It breathes the moment into my heart. Thank you.

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