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by RiverMaya

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MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 2 years ago

I love this poem. It breathes the moment into my heart. Thank you.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years ago

“ but two souls sharing the calm of evening's coming

is paradise in truth “

So very true…..!

PickFictionPickFictionabout 2 years ago

Interesting use of "he" and "she" there.

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1