All Comments on 'Eden's Fruit, Final Bite'

by Esperanza_Hidalgo

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vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
Holy Crap!

Brilliant words, brilliant imagery. Bravo!

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterabout 14 years ago
How can Eve resist?

Eden's luscious juice

excites my tongue, arousing

ceaseless wantonness.....

A beautiful suite of erotic haiku. Such talent!

Dr_GenomeDr_Genomeabout 14 years ago
Fantastic

set of haiku

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A SONNET FOR THE 1ST PAIR

of what may have happened. TK U MLJ LV NV

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